Narrative Update

Our original narrative we had in place was disliked by a large amount of our target audience after we asked them to comment on our current progress.We decided we will now create a narrative around the idea of a "behind the scenes/setting up"this is seen in a many Rock videos such as, Bon Jovi Livin' On A Prayer and Def Leppard Pour Some Sugar On Me. We have a lots of left over footage from MTV that as a group we feel will work when creating our new narrative. We believe that by doing this we will be able to appeal to our audience more our original idea and gain more positive feedback.