Narrative Update

Our original narrative we had in place was disliked by a large amount of our target audience after we asked them to comment on our current progress.We decided we will now create a narrative around the idea of a "behind the scenes/setting up"this is seen in a many Rock videos such as, Bon Jovi Livin' On A Prayer and Def Leppard Pour Some Sugar On Me. We have a lots of left over footage from MTV that as a group we feel will work when creating our new narrative. We believe that by doing this we will be able to appeal to our audience more our original idea and gain more positive feedback.

Music Video Decision

After doing some research into videos associated with the genre of Rock and after a discussing our ideas as a group about what is realistically possible, we have decided that we would like our music video to be recorded in a studio as it allows us capture both the performance and personal side of the band. We would like the band to perform to the cameras as if they are performing to an audience through the camera, however, no such audience is present. This is used in many other popular music videos such as, 'Green Day - American Idiot', and 'Foo Fighters - Pretender'. For our narrative we would like a sound girl to be on set observing the band perform and as the performance progresses she will begin to give off flirtatious signals towards James the lead singer and this connection between each other during the video  will progress so that they audience can observe this and relate to it, however at the end of the video we believe that he should seem to be going along with it but then he walks straight past her to his genuine girlfriend to create the sense of a 'Secret Sin'.